Handling Reviewer Comments

Handling Reviewer Comments

December 22, 2011 Add Comment
I posted this on Facebook this morning, but then realized that it might be useful to a broader audience than my family and friends. A short (but sweet) post relaying the best advice I've thus far received about the peer review (publishing) process and how to handle those ego-deflating (and sometimes just plain mean) reviewer comments. 


What to do when you get your reviewer comments back: 

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Arjuna and Karna, The Great Warriors

Arjuna and Karna, The Great Warriors

December 15, 2011 Add Comment
Karna and Arjuna are the prominent characters in Wayang. Wayang is a traditional drama portrayed in puppets or even can be the real human act as the characters in Wayang. An online dictionary defines wayang as a Javanese puppet drama that uses the shadows thrown by puppets manipulated rods against the translucent screen lit from behind. There are some forms of wayang, i.e, Wayang Kulit, Wayang Wong, and Wayang Golek. The story of wayang is taken from India. There are two main stories on it, they are Ramayana and Mahabarata. The story being played in Wayang tells us many things. Though not many people understand the language in as much as it uses the very old traditional language of Javanese, they can still read the books about it, listen to some interpreters or read the sequels from the internet. In the story of Wayang there are two characters that are remarkably dominant in Mahabarata, Arjuna and Karna. Arjuna and Karna are actually brothers, because they have the same mother but different father. Arjuna’s father is Krisna, one of powerful and wise deity. While Karna’s father is a solar deity, Surya. Both Arjuna and Karna have the differences as well as similarities.

The first difference between Karna and Arjuna is the place where they lived and were brought up. Karna Junior enjoyed his living with his foster parents since her mother threw him away on the river when he was baby. However, his warrior quality never vanished. He was the offspring of the Solar Deity; as a result, he inherited the natural power as well as the armour and a pair of earrings since he was born*. The hard lives he got from his family teaches him to not to be a spoiled boy. His foster father was just a charioteer; therefore, he must help his dad to earn living. His dad, Adhirata, knew that his Son, Karna, will soon become a great leader. For this reason, he brought Karna to a great teacher to learn about self-defense skills and the art of war. Thus, he became a skilful, strong and generous warrior. Arjuna on the other hands, he was born in a peaceful and well off family. He always got sufficient care and love from his mother and the surroundings. However, this condition did not make him to be a spoiled boy. He made use the situation to study hard and to improve his personal leadership skills. Besides, he also showed his generosity by helping others. He and his brothers, Pendawa Lima, easily got a good education such as self-defense, warfare and the archery skills. This made Arjuna became so strong, miraculous and charismatic figure that anyone could not defeat him but Karna.

Another difference between Karna and Arjuna is on their alliance. Karna decided to stand in the kurawa’s side, the evil group. The decision of Karna results from his pledge with Duryudana, the king of Kurawa . One day, Dorna (the archery teacher) held an archery competition. Karna heard this news and decided to join the competition. Nevertheless, he was refused since he is only the son of charioteer. If he wanted to join the competition he had to become a king. Knowing this, Duryudhana, the oldest the Kurawa (the one hundred sons of the blind king of Dhirtarasta), came to acknowledged him as a warrior and set him as a king of Anga. Karna felt the he owed Duryudhana much not only because he gave him a kingdom but also his strong believe who trust Karna as a great warrior instead of a son of charioteer. Because of Duryudhana’s deed, Karna could win the archery competition against Arjuna. Since then, he pledged to the king Duryudhana to always be loyal with him whenever and wherever he was. Actually, Karna once had been warned by Khirsna, the king of gods and also Arjunas father, to stand on the Pandawa’s side. He would negotiate to Pandawa to give the throne to Karna. However, because he had been pledged to Duryudhana he refused it and decided to keep his promise. Arjuna on the contrary, he decided to always struggle for the goods and to destroy the evils. Therefore to prepare the Great War Mahabarata, he always trained himself to master the warfare and archery skills in order to win the battle. He knew that he will face Karna, who has the same or even higher level than him. Arjuna believed even though Pandawa in quatities (Five sons) wass less than Kurawa (one hundred sons), Pandawa would win the war for they struggle for the goody instead of evils.

The destiny between the two is considered being the last difference. Karna is always in misfortune. First, he was set afloat on the river since his birth. He was set afloat by his own mother since he was baby. Karna is just like the Prophet Isa. Her mother do not really pregnant when the solar deity, Surya. Kunti, Karna’s mother, didn’t want to be accused as unmarried mother therefore with the help of his maid; she set the baby afloat on the river. The second misfortune is he was rejected by Dorna, warfare and archery teacher, since he is not from the Ksatria or Warrior family. The third misfortune is that he got two curses; the first curses is from his own teacher, Parashurama (Parashurama is Dorna’s teacher). This is because Parashurama will not teach everyone but Bhrahmin (Religious/monk family), and because of this Karna appeared before Parashurama as a Brahmin. After several years, Parashurama knew that Karna is a deceiver and therefore he cursed Karna that he will not able to use his mantra when he really wanted to use. The second curse is from the Brahmin family, since one day he suddenly killed the Brahmin’s cow. The Brahmin was poor and the only way he made his living was by the cow. Brahmin cursed Karna that he would one day be killed helpless and unarmed just exactly the same as the cow he killed. Arjuna however, he was always fortunate; he was born in the good family, he was thought by Drona without any refusals and difficulties, and he never got any curses*.

Although Karna and Arjuna have several differences, they both also share some similarities. The first similarity is that both of them are great warrior. Only Karna who had the same level of the warfare and archery as Arjuna did, and only Arjuna who could kill Karna. The second similarity is both Karna and Arjuna had to fight their own family. The last similarity is both of them have the same level of leadership. Karna and Arjuna were great leaders ever.

Inspite of the differences and similarities of Karna and Arjuna, Javanese people still considered Karna and Arjuna as the Hero. Javanese knew that Karna stand in evils side, but this is because he wants to be consistent with his own promise. Although, Karna support Kurawa but he always shows his care and generosity to others. Even Arjuna who killed him, praised Karna for his brave. Karna is now become a popular Hindu male name, he is also remembered as a great warrior in the wrong side.

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ By Dion Eprijum Ginanto ___________________________________________________________ *)

References 

Anonym (2010) Adipati Karna/Radheya/Suryaputra/Basusena/Bismantaka [online] http://wayang.wordpress.com/2010/07/21/adipati-karna-radheya-suryaputra-basusena-bismantaka. taken from the internet on December 2012

Anonym (n.d) Karna [online] www.wikipedia.com/karna. taken from the internet on December 2012 http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/wayang
Mobile Apps Get Rated

Mobile Apps Get Rated

December 15, 2011 Add Comment

A pretty key and interesting development has been unfolding over at the ESRB this fall, as reported by Wendy Goldman Getzler for Kidscreen magazine last month. It would seem that despite their early hesitation to delve into mobile games, the videogames ratings board is now extending its system to mobile games as well, through a new partnership with CTIA-The Wireless Association® (an
How to Write a Good Application Essay for a Scholarship

How to Write a Good Application Essay for a Scholarship

December 01, 2011 Add Comment
How to Write a Good Application Essay for a Scholarship
Dion E. Ginanto


Winning a scholarship has become my rooted dream since I was teenagers. I was so proud and sometimes felt jealous knowing my neighbors got a scholarship from abroad. From that moment, I promised to try my best to win a scholarship from overseas. Soon after I graduated from college, I applied for some scholarships right away. In 2008, I applied for four different scholarships; ADS from Australia, Stuned from Neatherland, Aminef from The US, and ALA from Australia. Three months after I applied for those scholarships, I always opened my email hoping to get good news from one of the scholarship sponsors. However, none of the applications were approved. Although I was disappointed at my first trial, I kept trying in the following years. Then at last, on April 4, 2011, on my birth day, I received an email from USAID informing that I was one of the scholars who received a grant to study to the US. I couldn’t believe reading that email, because it has been my seventh trials to read the email from scholarship sponsor and no one but PRESTASI-USAID who approved my application. This scholarship is the best birth day gift from God and therefore I commit to share my experience. One of the secret points why I won this grant is because of my application essay. Thus, I would like to share the readers of how to write a good application essay. Here are some useful steps based on my experience.


First thing first is that you must learn the requirements from the sponsors carefully. For instance, pay a very serious attention of what they want to know from you, how long is the essay? What are the dos and don’ts? What kind of font in computer you need to use? What are the layout and the size of the paper? You need to take a deep concern on these; because each scholarship has its own style of the essay. In addition, you are not suggested to add unnecessary information that is not required by the sponsor since this will obviously decrease your essay quality. If possible, you need to ask for some alumni to ask what the specific contents you need to write.


Next, making a good draft is very important if you want to make a good essay. To make a good essay you need to make an outline. A common outline of an application essay is that it must have an opening, body and closing. The opening is usually answering the question of who you are, what your field of study is and what your background of study is. In the opening part of the essay you are permitted to tell a short story about yourself that might interest the reader. Make a story that makes the readers impressed about you. For example, what you have done so far in empowering social community, or if you are working in the rural area how you managed the shortage of the facilities, etc. Then the body paragraph usually answers the following questions: How does the program of training you wish to pursue relate to your background and your career? What new changes and contributions do you hope to introduce in your field upon completion of the program? How will the program contribute to the position you will assume upon your return home? Finally, the final part of outline is the closing paragraph, or conclusion paragraph. Make a concise and brief summary about what you have done, what you are doing and what you will do.


The third step is to start writing. Start to develop the outline you have made. In this phase, you are suggested to browse the examples of the essay available in the internet. Nevertheless, you must not cheat, because once you are proven guilty of plagiarism you will be black listed. Use your own language. Do not be afraid of making mistake in grammar, spelling or the sentence structure. When you type, do not forget to turn the spelling and grammar checkers on. This will be very helpful to minimize the errors. Writing a good essay needs a continual process, therefore never expect you can finish your writing once. Writing an essay needs a continual process.


The last step is called proof reading process. As I told you before that you must not wrap up your essay in one trial; therefore, it’s better to check and check again of what you have done. Try to review your essay not at the same day you write it. One or two days after you finish writing is good, because you have fresher mind and thought. If possible, grab someone else to proof read your writing. Your English lecturer or the alumni of the scholarship are the appropriate people to be your proof reader. It will be easier for others to check your errors. Nonetheless, do not ask them to rewrite your whole essay since it will be considered plagiarism.


All in all, when you want your application essay to win a scholarship you should follow these steps: learn carefully about the requirements needed in the essay, make a good draft, start to write your essay concisely, and proof read your essay. If you follow these steps, you will follow my success in winning a prestigious scholarship. Good luck.